Talk:Deaf culture - Knowledge

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writing citations, and adding them to the text, and I'm not sure how well it squares with whatever your college course requires of you. But for this particular article, fixing the lead would be a big improvement, and takes a different sort of skill set: you'd have to take a more 20,000-foot view of the whole article, see what it's about, make sense of what's in the body of the article, and how well the lead does, or doesn't, summarize it. (Badly, in my view.) It could be that whole paragraphs need to be moved out of the lead to the body, either in some existing section or a new one or ones, and the lead rewritten from scratch. This is a much tougher task than "just" adding text and citations, but it would also lead to a (much) greater improvement to the article. I don't know if the amount of time you have for a course like this makes sense to take something like that on, but I get the impression from what you've written so far that you must be one of the top students, and not afraid to take on a big or tough job, so check with your instructor, and/or

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Culturally Deaf people have rules of etiquette for getting attention, walking through signed conversations, leave-taking, and otherwise politely negotiating a signing environment. It is customary to make and maintain steady, locked eye contact when communicating in deaf culture. They notify their friends before removing themselves from eyeshot (ex. Communicate that they are going to the restroom, etc.) Deaf people also keep each other informed of what is going on in one's environment. It is common to provide detailed information when leaving early or arriving late; withholding such information may be considered rude. Deaf people may be more direct or blunt than their hearing counterparts. When giving introductions, Deaf people typically try to find common ground. Deaf people may also consider time differently. Showing up early to large-scale events, such as lectures, is typical. This may be motivated by the need to get a seat that provides the best visual clarity for the Deaf person."

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believe this subhead should be separated into a new section and that diversity should refer to not only races, but also address the LGBTQ community. A subheader could be added addressing the intersection with the LGBTQ+ community. The section could note the prevalence of queer people in the Deaf community and discuss homophobia in the history of ASL. Further, it should discuss history of Deaf people leading efforts in the gay liberation movement, efforts of the National Gay and Lesbian Task Force to advocate for the Deaf community, development of resources and organizations for Deaf queer people, and Deaf drag.

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lot more specifics, and we need very reliable sources. In my opinion we also need a clear consensus here. Otherwise it's Knowledge that is being offensive to Deaf people. This is further complicated in this article by the use of "deaf" people in general, not necessarily those who identify with the Deaf community. Does the Deaf community consider it offensive to refer to someone who does not identify with the Deaf community as "Deaf"? There was a similar discussion at the talk page for

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what about it sparks concern with you. I was unclear on how detailed I needed to be when talking about the changes I made, and would love help. I do, however, believe that the phrasing on this section came across poorly when myself and others were reading it. I'm not sure it was intended, but sentences like "There are three views on Deaf people" come across as mildly offensive and unclear. Any advice you can give, I would appreciate!

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White-centric. In Deaf Education as well, Deaf Students of Color tend to have poorer academic outcomes than White Deaf students (especially those from Deaf families). Again, this can be corroborated by research studies, especially ones written by Deaf intersectional scholars/critical theorists. Anna Lim Franck 19:45, 17 February 2019 (UTC)

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It very much depends on the person, the situation, and the context in which the word is used. It's quite vague to state that "some Deaf people" find something offensive. How many is "some Deaf people"? What is the context? We definitely don't need such a vague generalization in the article. We need a

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2. be reflected in the language the article uses? (since I believe Knowledge standardly avoids referring to groups of people by what they would consider a slur, even if it might be ignorantly used by many people - for example, the article on Romani people thoroughly explains the word "gypsy" but uses

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for example, are part of the Deaf community; I'd say "no", but that's just my opinion.). Also, there's no such thing as "capital D deaf" in sign language afaik (well, not in one sign anyway, although you can of course express the concept) so if the Deaf community is "using" capital-D deaf, that means

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I'm in a bit of a rush, so just quickly for now: you're absolutely right about the "three views", and I noticed that at the time, and regreetted having to revert that along with the other stuff; had you made a smaller edit with just that or nearby stuff in it, I never would've reverted it. The change

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I wasn't sure which part you revised but one thing popped up in my thought while I was reading. In deaf and Deaf section, it is a hot topic nowadays. I suggest you to add like Deaf people tend are from deaf school, Gallaudet, etc while deaf from mainstream or not really proud of deaf.. maybe it could

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I'm currently in the process of adding back in the other sources that were on the article. Unfortunately, the format we use in my class to transfer our edits does not move the citations with, and I failed to notice that these sources had been removed. As for the red flag in my claim, I was wondering

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Nowadays, more Deaf people are aiming to re-frame the idea of the Hearing Loss to Deaf Gain. Instead of to see how Deaf people needed to be fixed, to learn how Deaf people do contribute to our society. Without Deaf people on this planet, it wouldn't be the same as of today. Deaf people contribute to

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Generally I agree. As I noted above, in general we don't make judgments about what is offensive. But this can be a gray area. There is widely acknowledged offensive terminology that would not be acceptable on Knowledge. That is a result of general societal norms about offensiveness. If "deaf" lower

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I reverted a series of six edits by a student editor. Much of it is fine, in particular the new Education section, but it was behind some problematic stuff, and couldn't revert just the latter; afaic the Education section can be readded without discussion. Other issues need discussion. Some talking

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to indicate stuff you propose to delete. Looking at the wikicode, I could see that you added a newline character in a couple of places, as if to create a new paragraph, but you need two newlines to do that, i.e., a completely blank line to separate paragraphs. So, I took the liberty to edit your

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section about the U.S. summarizing this article, and a few other sections about deaf culture elsewhere; probably enough information could be found to add brief sections for the UK, Australia, and France for starters, and then slowly ramp it up. That would be a much more balanced approach, rather

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I am currently working on a section on the Deaf Culture Knowledge page to expand the Deaf LGBTQ institutions section, but this page is lacking discussion of the LGBTQ+ community outside of this section. I see under "Acculturation" that there is a section titled "Diversity within Deaf Culture." I

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As educator and American Sign Language interpreter Anna Mindess writes, "it is not the extent of hearing loss that defines a member of the deaf community but the individual's own sense of identity and resultant actions." As with all social groups that a person chooses to belong to, a person is a

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Deaf people, in the sense of a community or culture, can then be seen as a minority group, and therefore some who are a part of this community may feel misunderstood by those who don't know sign language. Hearing family members may need to learn sign language in order for the deaf person to feel

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I have heard - somewhat word of mouth, but from a classmate who has done a decent amount of study on Deaf culture in college - that to some Deaf people, lowercase-d "deaf" is considered a slur. Not just that it reflects a deficit-focused idea of an "impairment" which they object to, but intense

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If you still want to talk about your paragraph 2 and 3 changes, let me know. But there's another, and better way you could help improve the article, which would be much more important than those changes imho, and it's to fix the lead. This is a different sort of work than hunting down sources,

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The primary basis of social customs in Deaf culture stem from the need to maintain good eye contact and visibility, and to improve the conditions of signing in order to simplify and increase comfort. These can create variation between Deaf culture and the other cultures around Deaf individuals.

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is supposed to summarize the body; it defines and serves as a brief introduction to the topic, and is not there to add any new or unique information. So basically, any changes you propose to the lead, need to be something that make it a better summary of the article body. That usually means,

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It is easier to understand it the way you propose, but is it true? By "community", I assume you meant the Deaf community, but if that's the case, I think that rearrangement would not be an improvement, because actually I believe the D/d usage comes from the academic community (which of course

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I think it may be worth mentioning in this Knowledge article about how Deaf People of Color are underrepresented within the U.S. Deaf Community. Several research articles have pointed out this fact and noted that, in general, Deaf literature and Deaf history being taught at schools are quite

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additional facts or new information or more detailed information of existing facts goes in the body first; then, if it's important enough, it gets summarized in the lead. In this case, the situation is complicated by the fact that the Lead is already too long, and imho very poorly done.

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Hello, I agree with your concern about not having subtitles. The man in the video was using American Sign Language (ASL). I am fluent in ASL so I went ahead and added subtitles to the "Deaf culture Introduction" video. Hopefully, all of the videos will be accessible to everyone.

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The videos in this article only showing a man explaining something in American (?) Sign Language should either get subtitles or be removed. What's the point of having several videos on a topic on the English-language Knowledge, that 99.9% of English speakers don't understand?

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In my opinion, #1 is preferable in theory, but practically speaking, it isn't going to happen; the article likely would end up 90% US, and a few token sentences about the rest of the world. So, that's not the way to go. A better solution, imho, is to retitle this article

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Capitalization also can be a gray area. Capitalization generally is a stylistic matter that is covered under Knowledge guidelines; if there's a policy I'm not aware of it, but feel free to correct me. Guidelines are more flexible than policies. For example, see

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Hi there! I totally understand your reasoning for a lot of this. As I am a student editor doing this for the first time, it is a learning process and I appreciate the help. I'd like to address any concerns and figure out some solutions.

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Nice work on the subtitles. I am new at this and supposed to ask a question for class assignment. I was wondering how do we contribute to subtitle scripts for the remaining videos which do not currently have subtitles or CC?

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how about to add some info about deaf and their typical behavior such as tap on shoulder, use light to get attention, bang on the table, etc... give readers better understand of deaf... looking forward for your ASL VIDEOS!

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No worries if you want to stick to the original plan, and maybe that squares better with your assignment, so just let me know what you want to do. If we want to deal with improvements to paragraphs 2 and 3, we still can.

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it comes from the academic community, and this is the Talk page where I don't have to put a reference for it, i.e., it's just my belief and I might be wrong. But, on the article page, we have to stick to what we can

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enough to immediately upset a Deaf person reading it. Maybe that's just that one person's idea of what they consider a harmful slur, but if it's a more common perspective among Deaf people, should that information

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our society in many ways; to bring new perspective that nobody would thought of it. When a Deaf person understand their identity, they start to embrace and to see in positive ways, known as Deaf Gain.

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Why don't we start on areas of agreement: why don't you go ahead and put your education section back in as it was, as well as the "three views" fix. Then we can move on to the other stuff. Agreed?

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Although it is common for people to marry within their own culture, the Deaf community has the highest rate of intra-cultural marriages. Around 90% of deaf people marry someone who is also deaf."

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article covering the whole world, with just a brief section on the United States summarizing it, and pointing to the newly renamed "Deaf culture in the United States". Pinging contributors

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As far as the specific changes to paragraphs two and three you propose, we could discuss those, but there's another issue here, because the 2nd and 3rd paragraphs are part of the lead. The

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I am a student editor with a few proposed edits to this article. I am still learning about formatting and etiquette of Knowledge, so please let me know what I can improve on!

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member of the Deaf community if he/she "identifies him/herself as a member of the Deaf community, and other members accept that person as a part of the community."

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Please note that there is some rephrasing of information as well and that the information on education was eliminated (as it is part of the education section).

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However, deaf adults who are verbal and adults who became deaf late in life usually view it opposite of the Deaf community - as an impairment.

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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment in Spring 2019. Further details are available

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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment in Fall 2016. Further details are available

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This article is or was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment in Fall 2018. Further details are available

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has decided to favor it in order not to be offensive; we do it, because that's what the majority of reliable English sources do. Also,

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to the wording you did there was very much an improvement, and I encourage you to put it back in. More advice later. Oh, please read

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Also, I propose replacing the bullet list and unsourced information in the "behavioral patterns" section with the following text:

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While Harlan Lane is an excellent resource, you can't just remove other excellent resources in order to add him, as you did in

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banner, and I've added one to the article. The underlying problem is that the current title, "Deaf culture" is contrary to

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Imagine the article on Armenian culture had videos in Armenian without subtitles explaining aspects of Armenian culture.

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The final edits I would like to make to this page is to change subheading name "behavioral patterns" to "social customs"

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case became offensive by society in general, it would not be acceptable on Knowledge. As a related example, the terms "

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nlike some other cultures, a deaf person may join the community later in life, rather than needing to be born into it.

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Retitle the article so that the title matches the current content (and then create a new article for the global view).

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My third edit would be to delete the following bolded line in order to make the lead section more concise:

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Many members take pride in their Deaf identity and consider deafness a linguistic and cultural identity. U

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the two things you're comparing or something. If you're comparing whole paragraphs, then indentation or

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until a consensus is reached, and readers of this page are welcome to contribute to the discussion.

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for that content in the latter page, and it must not be deleted as long as the latter page exists.

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between

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This article was the subject of a Wiki Education Foundation-supported course assignment, between

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in writing, so are we back to talking about Deaf academia, or what? That all needs sorting out.

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was accomplished 2 years ago, although I think both articles still might need a rebalancing.--

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than an article that is hugely top-heavy for the U.S. and almost nothing about anyplace else.

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We don't change terminology in articles because of what some people want. We use Knowledge's

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post to create those paragraph breaks; I hope that's okay. Anyway, on to your comments.

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No further comments here, please; the merge discussion has been moved; see link below.

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Add sufficient material from other countries to give the article a more worldwide view.

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primarily from the viewpoint of the United States and doesn't take a global approach

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has substantial overlap with this article. Probaby what should happen, is that

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to determine issues like this, which generally comes down to how a majority of

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Second, I propose the addition of the following bolded lines to this paragraph:

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help the readers to understand content background behind it? just a thought!

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Would love to engage with others' thoughts and expertise on these matters.

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would be the way to go; then you can use bolding as you did, or color (see

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when adding content and consider tagging or removing unsourced information.

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http://dsdj.gallaudet.edu/assets/section/section2/entry19/DSDJ_entry19.pdf

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Knowledge:Redirects for discussion/Log/2023 February 4 § Deaf ethnicity

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about "bias" and "politically correct" is a potential red flag. Your "

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In the Deaf Culture wiki page, we should add the section "Deaf Gain."

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and so on) to show the before/after changes. You can also use

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I've removed the tags from the article because the split to

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forces the acceptability of some terms to change over time.

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English sources use the term. We are an encyclopedia, a

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is also quite good, although read the Manual of Style on

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Additions to the 'Diversity within Deaf Culture' section

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intersects with the Deaf community). Now, I said that I

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Talk:Deaf culture in the United States § Merge proposal

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First, I would like to rephrase the following sentence

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