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The plot section is a little bit too long. Try to trim it to 700 words or below. I also think that a subsection discussing the setting of the game would help me understand the plot a bit easier, because there is a lot of in-universe stuff in the plot section that can be better
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The gameplay section is inadequate. It barely explains to me how this game plays. "Common elements of the Dragon Quest series" is only a "see also" and readers should not need to click on that to understand how this game
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Yeah, I think it would be better if you are not put under a time restraint while working on the article. Anyway, I am open to come back again if you renoninate it several weeks or a month later.
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But, since the changes seem to be extensive in every section I can see why a week may be too little time, most of us don’t have a free week! :) Anyway, thanks for the review.
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While I applaud your project for nominating many of the articles to GA. This needs some more work before it has a chance of passing.
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Elements added later included an expanded plot and an option to listen to an orchestral version of the score.
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