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Matches source from CageMatch should be used to verify the portion of text above since SuperLuchas does not explicitly state it
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His father was a professional wrestler, known under the ring name Emilio Charles, active in the 1940s and 1950s.
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but was not trained by his father;" - you've already mentioned the text in bold in the previous sub-section
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Am going to put the review on hold to allow the nominator to respond/query the points raised above.
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His father was a professional wrestler in the 1940s and 1950, and was known under the
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Reference 24 is missing the author of the work and the date it was published
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Now promoting to GA class; I've made some small changes to the article.
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Emilio Charles Jr. is the son of professional wrestler Emilio Charles,
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treated those who were not as handsome as him with scorn.
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