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Can you spell out the acronyms the first time you use them. AWW, PWP, PWA, SEPW, TNA (actually I do know this one, but point still holds) and MPW mean nothing to me. If you want you can add the acronym in brackets and then just use that for the remainder of the article. It should always be spelt out
1017:- Unsourced claims for music generally get removed. However it's his main theme, so it should be added. It's hard to find a traditional source for this, as they don't mention the songs being used. However, the source is from the promotions page, so it isn't so bad. I can remove if it necessary.
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904:- Hmm, no. He didn't have to, he changed his gimmick, (Which is kind of like the wrestler's identity). So, he went from being portrayed as Spanish, to being Portrayed as English. Along with this, he also changed his ring-name. I'll reword this.
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777:- Not really. I could remove this. He's known to be a football fan, and fan of Plymouth Argyle, and that he went to Plymouth University, but other than that, nothing. He's not married, and I can't find any sources on his hobbies.
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