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our historical archives. For all the qualities that stood out about her – religion, domesticity, passivity and anti-political nature – it was also the strength of these qualities that enabled
Mandela to develop his career and educational aspirations. However, beyond her contribution to Mandela’s life, this was a woman who was strong in her own right in that she maintained a career and her household financially and emotionally whilst married and later as a single mother who was able to continue providing for her children – roles that Mandela was unable to fulfil sufficiently."
1858:; thank you. I really appreciate your time in reading through this article and offering such a thorough review. I was actually planning on responding to your other comments in the next few days - I haven't had much time for Knowledge (XXG) over the past few weeks so haven't been able to respond to everything all in one go. Even though the article has been passed as a GA, I'm happy to keep responding to some of your queries, if you like? All the best,
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Paraphrasing and summarizing this would make for a lovely Legacy section: "It is a worthwhile consideration that the reason little or scant interest is taken in Mase’s life, is because her relations with Nelson
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Expand the boiling water threat with the reason for that, paraphrasing and summarizing: "In 1952, Evelyn spent several months in Durban training to become a midwife, while her husband's mother and sister took care of the children. Meredith reports that Evelyn returned to find Mandela's secretary
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I like this article, it provides insight into Mandela's first marriage that is rarely talked about. You have a nice writing style that I like. I have provided some comments to tweak it and make the content a little crisper and clearer.
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These were just suggestions and are not necessary. I think some round out our interpretation of Mase, like the context of why she threatened to throw boiling water on one of Mandela's ladies. Perhaps you will think about them
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I've reworded this as the following: "However, some members of Mase's family believed that Winnie was preventing them from receiving financial support that Mandela had arranged for them." Do you think that works okay?
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I am a little confused about her parents. Do you have their names? Did her parents get divorced while she was a little girl? Or, was she the daughter of the second wife?
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installed in her home. Evelyn, a tough woman, threatened to throw boiling water over her and the woman left the house, but the affair continued."
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