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Legitimate concerns, no opposition or improvements made; Matters raised in the reassessment were not addressed. These matters will remain valid until the next GA Review, whereupon they must be addressed first.
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Legitimate concerns, no opposition or improvements made; Matters raised in the reassessment were not addressed. These matters will remain valid until the next GA Review, whereupon they must be addressed first.
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The next paragraph details members pursuing solo activities in various industries, including music, film, television, and theater. Includes awards won and how many copies sold, like this.
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First paragraph notes solo and unit activities for 2020, due to hiatuses from the group by several members while serving their military enlistment.
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First para mentions concerts, pre-orders, releases and music video. It is focussed on statistics and ratings. Billboard, Gaon, like this.
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This paragraph focusses on statistics, firsts, and legal issues. The family legal comments should not be here. There is some
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Good coverage of Olympic Games participation and commemoration by the Korean Mint Corporation;
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