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removed these statements from the article for several reasons. First off, there were no citations to back up these statements. Secondly, these statements are subjective. How does one define diversity? Some might make the argument that other schools in the district, like
Homestead or Lynbrook, are more diverse. And even that assertion would be up for debate. Knowledge (XXG) articles are supposed to be written based on objectivity, not subjectivity. Thus, calling Fremont "unique" among the other high schools, based upon the argument that it's more diverse (which cannot be definitively, objectively confirmed) is subjective. Thirdly, those statements make that section, and possibly the whole article itself, look like an advertisement.
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In the history section of this article, there is mention that the school's mascot was changed "at the request of
American Indians". That claim is patently nonsense. For starts, the racial description is "Native American". And if you are having trouble seeing why the claim is nonsense try
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