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with the exception of the 'last RN submarine attack'. It is not in the
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sank a freighter on 11 August. It's curious to see two builders listed. What was their role in this, did one build the hull while the other fitted her out? Where was she launched? The design and description section should include this, as information in the lead needs to be cited in the article body,
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The VA/JB information is in uboat.net on inspection, but without any clarification. It may well be the engine issue as you say. If so that can be re-added to the article if it can be cited, otherwise it is enough to simply state VA was the builder. The rest of the edits address most of my concerns,
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Made a few edits following your comments. Firstly I looked again at the building information as it was something taken for granted as it was on the article beforehand. I can't find any evidence of co working between the two builders, and Tiptoe was a Barrow boat, not a Clyde boat. I've removed John
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