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508: 490: 1139:— Would just like to note that I started the section off originally with information about the music first because, to my knowledge, Britt Daniel began writing the music before the lyrics, so I felt it was appropriate to start that way. I took out the technical personnel aspects from the Composition section, though I felt the bits about who produced the song along with Britt Daniel and Jim Eno's instrumental contributions were important enough to keep. 406: 385: 21: 637: 940: 930: 917: 904: 881: 849: 821: 808: 245: 1221: 863: 958: 891: 835: 795: 562: 297: 276: 664: 416: 307: 1155: 1132: 1106: 1063: 1024: 757:, and I'll be doing this review. This is an automated message that helps keep the bot updating the nominated article's talkpage working and allows me to say hi. Feel free to reach out and, if you think the review has gone well, I have some open GA nominations that you could (but are under no obligation to) look at. 1146:
It was also used in a commercial for car manufacturer Jaguar. The song was also used in a viral video featuring the miniature research robot Keepon, in which the robot dances to the song. The video has garnered millions of views on YouTube since its
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I feel like the Composition section is a bit upside down - surely it should talk about the meaning and how Daniel wrote it before saying who recorded what parts? Is all of the personnel info needed in this section anyway?
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Hilton, Robin (December 8, 2015). "Spoon's Britt Daniel Explains How He Made 'Gimme Fiction,' Track By Track". NPR Music. Retrieved August 15, 2019
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Everything has inline citation except a quote in the lead and composition section, where refs should be added (looks like
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Amazon is used a few times for CD spec, release dates, etc - is there no better source for this?
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The composition info in the second paragraph might be too detailed, this part could be cut back
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Thanks for reviewing the article! I have made some changes in accordance with your review.
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Infobox and tables suitable, good use of split columns in personnel
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I was taking some pictures and then can’t find the camera now
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Other sources look good, used appropriately, I can't see OR
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Free, licensed, image of Britt Daniel that's relevant
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Fair use cover in infobox, short song clip used well
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