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The obvious issue is that there is a reliance on primary sources. The prose here is largely synthesized from the depictions of the
Infinity Stones in the films and television series—so much so, in fact, that such assessments may constitute a quickfail. I am willing to give you a chance to heavily
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I just revamped this section by merging it with the fictional history info. I split it into two sections to have before and after
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The word "subsequently" is used within several words of each other. In the context of the paragraph, "subsequently" refers to a larger span of time than what is presented; Thanos' hand is severed in 2018, but Stark, Banner, and Rocket do not create the Nano
Gauntlet until
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Reality Stone, appearing in its fluid-like weapon state called the Aether, to destroy the Nine Realms and return the universe to its pre-Big Bang state, only to be thwarted by Bor, who had it
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For this article, images are obviously going to be difficult to hunt down. An image of James Gunn in the
Background and development section may be fine. Padding out paragraphs may help with making images feel more full.
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and variations of destroying the Stones. Again, the information in these sections would be great for that List of
Infinity Stones section, while the Infinity Saga section can cover the events of
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omitted from the reader's previous understanding. The most egregious sentence is the aforementioned one about Thanos attempting to use the Nano
Gauntlet. I would rewrite that sentence to read,
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I would have liked to seen a stronger representation of this section in the article as a whole. If that isn't possible, that's fine, but this section definitely needs to be fleshed out.
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here. I would also experiment with seeing if you can elaborate on how it influenced the plot of the films, although I'd also be cautious of overflowing the paragraph. You repeat
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The significance of this section is debatable. "Further depictions" could be a good section title when used in tandem with "The Blip". In general, this section may qualify for
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Maybe it's because I'm not on a laptop or desktop, but I don't see that. The only problem with moving it is that its current location covers the episode the image is from. --
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I've added 4-5 additional sources to mix with them where possible and to cover additional things. Not sure if that's good, or if I should look for additional refs. --
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I don't question the usefulness of a table, but tables should be supplementary material. For an example of how tables might be used, I refer you to a draft I have at
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establishes that Loki has control of Erik Selvig's mind, allowing him to teleport to Earth by manipulating him into changing his device. I haven't seen
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Thanks for the great review so far. It's been nice to have a reviewer that knows their grammar and punctuation since that's not always my strength. --
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Citationitis in the second and fifth sentences of the first paragraph. Note passive voice in the third sentence; I would alter this sentence to read,
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because the Stones implicitly comprise all six gems. It may be helpful to define that there are six Infinity Stones and their names to begin with.
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I changed the wording to being the MacGuffins of the Saga, as opposed to the 2 Avengers films only, which is cited in the background section. --
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I think I've addressed everything in one way or another. Let me know if something still needs cleaned up or if I missed something completely. --
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Added an image of James Gunn with a little more info attached to the background section. --
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It's been years since I've seen a Marvel film, but I'll try my best.
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