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The remix release sentence should be swapped with the drill and lyrics sentence for the correct order; you can have the final para dedicated to the remix
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now and there were some mistakes but they were not the changes themselves being missed so I copyedited the fixes in, plus good luck with the GT! --
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Why is the additional producer not mentioned here and in the lead? Bare in mind, it's not like the infobox where you can't add them.
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s Jordan Darville wrote that Lil Wayne added" โ†’ "while Darville wrote the rapper contributes" to avoid overusing his stage name
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I will review this soon, per your request... a bit ironic since I originally nominated it for deletion. --
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Remove release year in brackets, as it is specified later on in the sentence
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Remove the chorus and outro parts, as this is too specific for the lead
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Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the
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thanks a lot for the review. Only a few more articles to go!
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s Jessica McKinney opined that" โ†’ "McKinney opined that"
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Remove repetition of Khadafi Julio under writing credits
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Make sure all of these are archived by using the tool
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