692:. I indeed feel that I am needing feedback on other aspects rather than grammar this time around. I was very pleased with the Guild's work here and I believe that the grammar concerns raised by Royroydeb are not significant enough to quick fail this. I would like to hear from him soon, but I am afraid that his prolonged absence might mean that he has given up reviewing the article?
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I have to second SOAD KoRn here that this article shouldn't be quick failed. I have been monitoring the progress for a while and this article failed the first time for grammar issues because SK is not native in
English (although very talented nonetheless). After the involvement of the Guild I don't
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However, I see that many of your comments are on grammar. As you may see on the talk page, this article has already been copy-edited by the WikiProject Guild of Copy
Editors. If that is the reason why you are saying it does not deserve a full review, I regret to tell that you but I will have to
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I respect your opinion, but after waiting months for a GA review I would like you to expand on why this article does not deserve a full review. As I said before, I have been busy in my daily life lately and that has kept me from working on the article. I expect to start it
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There is not link for singles in tennis here. However, singles/doubles are very common terms in individual sports. I am quite surprised they are not familiar to you. Still, I linked its first mention in the article for the general
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think there are major options left in that regard. I would jump in myself but a) I have made occasional edits so I don't know if I'm allowed and b) I doubt my capacity to stick around on such a long article.
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I added reference to Sousa's Davis Cup participation history. You can see there that his role changed from playing exclusively dead rubbers to taking part in 2 or 3 matches per round.
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The phrase preceding it answers your question. The
National Tennis Training Center closed and he was forced to move somewhere else. That's why he decided to go to Spain.
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I couldn't find any additional source to that. Regardless, I find it meaningless for the purpose of the article. This is about Joao's life, not his father's.
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On the contrary, I believe it is useful so that readers know in advance that Sousa's 2011 season was highlighted with important moments in his career.
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I apologize for any inconvenience caused by my delay. Real life matters have caught up with me lately. I intend to address your work this weekend.
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for taking the time to evaluate this GA nomination. Even though I am not as active as earlier this year, I look forward to working with you here.
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After going through the rest of the article, I am sorry that this article doesnot deserve a full review. I suggest you to do a peer review.
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Even though the source says that of he being a judge, you should find out where he is judge. I mean judge at a civil court or what?
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I will not put months of work and wait in jeopardy simply because of that. I'm sorry, but I believe you understand.
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I still cannot understand why Sousa went to Spain, I mean were training facilities not enough in
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with the country's first king - make it "Afonso I, Portugal's first king"
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His role at the 2012 Davis Cup rose in importance - this is uncited.
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play tennis. Still, I rephrased it so that it is clearer now.
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