450:
426:
412:
381:
357:
330:
320:
294:
280:
266:
235:
201:
42:
485:, and his contributions to the book that I cite in this article are widely cited by other authors, for example by historian Dominic A. Pacyga in his recent book 'Chicago: a biography', in which he writes "perhaps the most extensive look at de Sable's life is John F. Swenson, 'John Baptiste Point de Sable: The Founder of Modern Chicago,' in
623:
All in all, very nice. Just a few niggles, as outlined above. I've put the article on hold for seven days to allow folks to address the issues I've brought up. Feel free to contact me on my talk page, or here with any concerns, and let me know one of those places when the issues have been addressed.
480:
states that 'self-published material may be acceptable when produced by an established expert on the topic of the article whose work in the relevant field has previously been published by reliable third-party publications.' I believe that John
Swenson also satisfies this criterion. He has published
475:
This website is the online version of a printed book. The book has many individual chapter authors, two of whom are also the publishers of the book, but the citations are to the contributions by John
Swenson, who is not one of the publishers, so I don't believe that this counts as a self-published
476:
work. I linked to the website rather than citing the book so that readers could have access to the material, I can change the citations to citations to the book if you would prefer. If you are not convinced that this is not a self-published source I also note that
624:
If I may suggest that you strike out, check mark, or otherwise mark the items I've detailed, that will make it possible for me to see what's been addressed, and you can keep track of what's been done and what still needs to be worked on.
47:
505:
If you're planning on taking this to FAC, I'd hesitate to use this source as a source there. Given the little that is sourced to this content, I'm not going to hold the article up on this.
126:
601:
Is it really necessary to go into details about the graduates of the DuSable High School or what it currently is? That should be covered in the article on the school itself.
122:
107:
52:
80:
99:
70:
179:
173:
115:
17:
404:
75:
286:
92:
207:
525:
252:
227:
629:
510:
163:
150:
632:
615:
592:
569:
542:
513:
500:
166:
153:
610:
587:
564:
537:
495:
394:
215:
299:
need to resolve some issues with reliability of some sources and one citation needed tag.
552:
343:
211:
625:
506:
418:
223:
219:
159:
146:
605:
582:
559:
532:
490:
487:
A Compendium of the Early
History of Chicago to the Year 1835 When the Indians Left
477:
272:
528:
doesn't work so I'm unable to verify that it was taken by a federal employee…
481:
on the history of early chicago in other reliable sources such as the
482:
469:
578:
Need to fix the citation needed tag in the
Memorials section.
531:
I'm not sure about this, so I removed it from the article.—
134:
103:
558:
I've removed the sentence that this source supported.—
553:
http://www.uic.edu/orgs/asri/images/ASRIGAZZETT1.pdf
431:Need to resolve the image sourcing on one image.
8:
403:(images are tagged and non-free images have
30:
158:I'll be reviewing this article shortly.
61:
33:
7:
398:, where possible and appropriate.
24:
18:Talk:Jean Baptiste Point du Sable
448:
424:
410:
379:
355:
352:Fair representation without bias
328:
318:
292:
278:
264:
233:
199:
1:
633:15:23, 14 November 2010 (UTC)
616:16:26, 25 November 2010 (UTC)
593:16:23, 25 November 2010 (UTC)
570:16:08, 25 November 2010 (UTC)
543:16:06, 25 November 2010 (UTC)
501:15:46, 25 November 2010 (UTC)
167:15:01, 14 November 2010 (UTC)
154:15:01, 14 November 2010 (UTC)
514:19:38, 5 December 2010 (UTC)
470:http://www.earlychicago.com/
449:
425:
411:
380:
356:
329:
319:
293:
279:
265:
234:
200:
483:Illinois Historical Journal
648:
526:File:Dusablelandmark.jpg
189:reasonably well written
417:(appropriate use with
551:Likewise, what makes
392:It is illustrated by
344:neutral point of view
308:broad in its coverage
524:The source link for
555:a reliable source?
472:a reliable source?
405:fair use rationales
376:No edit wars, etc.
248:factually accurate
614:
604:Agreed—removed. —
591:
568:
541:
499:
463:General comments:
419:suitable captions
89:
88:
639:
608:
585:
562:
535:
493:
489:" (p. 413–414).—
452:
451:
428:
427:
414:
413:
383:
382:
359:
358:
332:
331:
322:
321:
296:
295:
282:
281:
273:reliable sources
268:
267:
237:
236:
203:
202:
139:
130:
111:
43:Copyvio detector
31:
647:
646:
642:
641:
640:
638:
637:
636:
341:It follows the
315:(major aspects)
120:
97:
91:
85:
57:
29:
22:
21:
20:
12:
11:
5:
645:
643:
621:
620:
619:
618:
598:
597:
596:
595:
575:
574:
573:
572:
548:
547:
546:
545:
521:
520:
519:
518:
517:
516:
465:
464:
460:
459:
458:
457:
456:
455:
436:
435:
434:
433:
432:
390:
389:
388:
387:
386:
366:
365:
364:
363:
362:
339:
338:
337:
336:
335:
304:
303:
302:
301:
300:
271:(citations to
244:
243:
242:
241:
240:
184:
183:
140:
87:
86:
84:
83:
78:
73:
67:
64:
63:
59:
58:
56:
55:
53:External links
50:
45:
39:
36:
35:
28:
25:
23:
15:
14:
13:
10:
9:
6:
4:
3:
2:
644:
635:
634:
631:
627:
617:
612:
607:
603:
602:
600:
599:
594:
589:
584:
580:
579:
577:
576:
571:
566:
561:
557:
556:
554:
550:
549:
544:
539:
534:
530:
529:
527:
523:
522:
515:
512:
508:
504:
503:
502:
497:
492:
488:
484:
479:
474:
473:
471:
467:
466:
462:
461:
454:
453:
446:
443:
442:
440:
437:
430:
429:
422:
420:
408:
406:
400:
399:
397:
396:
391:
385:
384:
377:
374:
373:
371:
367:
361:
360:
353:
350:
349:
347:
345:
340:
334:
333:
326:
316:
312:
311:
309:
305:
298:
297:
290:
288:
276:
274:
262:
258:
257:
255:
254:
249:
245:
239:
238:
231:
229:
225:
221:
217:
213:
209:
197:
193:
192:
190:
186:
185:
182:for criteria)
181:
177:
175:
171:
170:
169:
168:
165:
161:
156:
155:
152:
148:
145:
141:
138:
137:
133:
128:
124:
119:
118:
114:
109:
105:
101:
96:
95:
82:
79:
77:
74:
72:
69:
68:
66:
65:
60:
54:
51:
49:
46:
44:
41:
40:
38:
37:
32:
26:
19:
622:
486:
444:
438:
416:
402:
393:
375:
369:
351:
342:
324:
314:
307:
284:
270:
261:(references)
260:
251:
247:
205:
195:
188:
172:
157:
143:
142:
135:
131:
117:Article talk
116:
112:
93:
90:
81:Instructions
468:What makes
220:word choice
104:visual edit
253:verifiable
48:Authorship
34:GA toolbox
445:Pass/Fail
325:(focused)
144:Reviewer:
71:Templates
62:Reviewing
27:GA Review
626:Ealdgyth
507:Ealdgyth
160:Ealdgyth
147:Ealdgyth
76:Criteria
581:Done. —
439:Overall
224:fiction
196:(prose)
127:history
108:history
94:Article
606:Jeremy
583:Jeremy
560:Jeremy
533:Jeremy
491:Jeremy
395:images
370:stable
368:It is
346:policy
306:It is
246:It is
226:, and
216:layout
187:It is
176:review
478:WP:RS
228:lists
178:(see
136:Watch
16:<
630:Talk
611:talk
588:talk
565:talk
538:talk
511:Talk
496:talk
250:and
212:lead
210:for
180:here
164:Talk
151:Talk
123:edit
100:edit
208:MoS
628:-
509:-
447::
441::
423::
415:b
409::
401:a
378::
372:.
354::
348:.
327::
323:b
317::
313:a
310:.
291::
287:OR
283:c
277::
269:b
263::
259:a
256:.
232::
222:,
218:,
214:,
204:b
198::
194:a
191:.
174:GA
162:-
149:-
125:|
106:|
102:|
613:)
609:(
590:)
586:(
567:)
563:(
540:)
536:(
498:)
494:(
421:)
407:)
289:)
285:(
275:)
230:)
206:(
132:·
129:)
121:(
113:·
110:)
98:(
Text is available under the Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike License. Additional terms may apply.