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720:'Bieber related topics would continue to trend on Twitter, including MSG-ANNIVERSARY Beliebers Love Jelena, and "Happy Birthday Pattie"' — remove comma before reference 47, add comma after MSG-MSG-ANNIVERSARY, remove comma after 'Beliebers Love Jelena' due to the fact that 'and' follows after it.
647:'Immediately following Bieber updating, sixty responses to him are posted a second' — when? What is meant by that? Is what is trying to be said that when he posts something, sometimes he gets up to 60 responses in a second. Also, sixty ⇒ 60, as it is below 10.
695:'Bieber fans were upset with Twitter and tried to cheat the new algorithm by getting related words and mispellings connected to Bieber to trend including the words Twieber and Jieber' — remove? I see no point in saying that they were upset, because not
516:'... he tweeted "#11MillionBeliebers! I LOVE YOU ALL!! THANK YOU....tonight was already a fun great night and now it is even better. THANK U THANK U THANK U' — cut quote with an ellipsis, I don't need a full tweet which is easily researchable.
370:'Author Mike Skinner in "The Story of the Streets" says based on the Twitter metrics, "all roads lead to Justin Bieber"' — says ⇒ said. "The Story of the Streets" ⇒ italics needed, as it is title. However, not that notable — could be removed.
349:'When Bieber makes a joke on Twitter about what he is doing, it often gets mistaken by people as the truth and ends up reported as true elsewhere' — the source (#13) says about a supergroup. Please explain in article.
886:'... search results for Bieber will pull in Bieber related Tweets in a search results section called "Latest News."' — remove period from quote of "Latest News" as there is not a period in the original quote.
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1437:(focused)
144:Reviewer:
71:Templates
62:Reviewing
27:GA Review
1237:Hawkeye7
1175:Hawkeye7
1143:Hawkeye7
1083:Hawkeye7
1036:Hawkeye7
1004:Hawkeye7
972:Hawkeye7
941:Best Buy
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788:Hawkeye7
778:and the
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207:hashtags
157:contribs
76:Criteria
1550:Overall
1337:fiction
1309:(prose)
1208:on hold
744:Shalott
127:history
108:history
94:Article
1507:images
1482:stable
1480:It is
1458:policy
1418:It is
1359:It is
1339:, and
1329:layout
1300:It is
1285:review
890:Done.
869:Done.
786:Done.
601:Done.
546:Done.
374:Done.
255:Done.
197:Entire
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1287:(see
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624:Drake
136:Watch
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