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Ah, I didn't realize you weren't done, I'm sorry. The Later operation paragraph and middle paragraph of the flagship section are a little long; could you split them up perhaps? Natural place for the second one would be before you talk about Amazon's acquisition. Please ping me when you're done.
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I'm not sure of the status of the interior amenities, but I'm leaning toward saying that they don't exist anymore. Earlier this year, the building was acquired by Amazon, and their plans aren't super detailed. But again, I'm not sure what's happening in there.
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Maybe make more clear the status of the holdout lot? You say the company signed a lease for the holdout in 1986, but the owner refused to sell the land in section 2, Design. I think I get it, but maybe make it clear that the owner refused to sell the land
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You have a good point and normally I would do this. However, I'm planning to make an article specifically about the B. Altman & Company
Building, which I've been putting off since January. If I do this now, I'll end up undoing it soon afterward.
643:"When Samuel Reyburn... window displays." This sentence feels out of place, and I don't think its that relevant. If these displays were a pioneering thing, note that, but otherwise I think it would be better if it was omitted.
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The article is illustrated well, and all the photos have permissive licensing. Perhaps a photo of the building in the 20s could be added? I found a couple on Google which should be public domain by now.
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Alright, I've gone over the article again and it looks good. I appreciate the recent information w.r.t. Amazon's intentions with the building. Shall pass the nomination accordingly.
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Okay kind of irrelevant, but I just confused this with the earlier GA nom of yours, and got so scared because I didn't see any of my review. Thank God this is a different article!!
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Dorothy Shaver was the first woman in the United States to head a multimillion-dollar firm; provides extra establishment of her notability
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Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.
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Again, I have questions about tense. Do the gym, solarium, etc. still exist? What about the dining areas and food court?
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Overall, the article is in great shape; I'll pass the nomination once you've responded to my comments above. Cheers,
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Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the
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