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544:- the earliest mention of him in exile in the US is 1982. I presume, but cannot verify, that he left nearly immediately after the death of Viera and did not return at all until 1989. As I can't verify the earlier date, though, I haven't included it in the article.
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For one thing, it's mostly but not completely chronological, e.g. the first paragraph mentions a strike in 1980 but the next paragraphs talks about the start of the civil war the year before. I understand if the sources don't have dates for
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I have made a series of changes / re-organizations that I believe address all the concerns above. It's a definite improvement, so thank you for the suggestions!
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831:, it would be better to mention his children in the previous paragraph about his marriages. I don't think you need to mention his grandchildren.
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was survived by two daughters from his first marriage, Margarita Gómez
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shows "Violation
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I believe I have addressed all of your comments. Let me know what further changes need to be made, and thank you for the review!
696:- I think I understood what you were saying, but I'm no good with reference formatting. Let me know if I didn't actually fix it!
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Hello, I will be reviewing this article shortly. Sorry that you had to wait four months for this.
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