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The undo action performed a lot more than only removing the {{cn}} markers that offended you. Good articles reviewers are instructed to make changes rather than just explain what needs to be done. That said, if you are just going to undo changes rather than continue to edit the article, then there is
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Thank you for that extensive amount of editing work. The article is now much easier to read. You are correct in that precise measurements are not required everywhere in an article, however, precise language is required. For example, "in the past" is unacceptable for a good article. The one instance
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The lead is very hard to follow. The list of townships then a list of tributaries are rough going. Reminds me of those genealogy lists in the Bible (this person begot …). Further down in the article, under Course, that same information is easy to digest as it flows (pun intended), which avoids the
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Your edits also made incorrect changes to the wording, altering the flow of sentences and in some cases making it more precise than the sources support. If you can hand this off to another reviewer, feel free to do so, but I do not want to keep this in the queue for another half a year.
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I suspect that most of the claims that need citations are actually covered by citations found in later sentences. If so, reusing the existing citations is absolutely okay. Doing that will leave no doubt that every claim has a valid citation.
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Perhaps it is better now? All changes have been made except for the course section, where it would be very difficult to make precise measurements, which probably don't matter to the reader anyway. --
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