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It's basically whichever production grossed the most for a certain week throughout the entire history of the theater. I reworded it briefly, but a list of weekly box office records throughout the theater's history would be very hard to source. Maybe this should be removed instead.
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These sentences provide context for the theater's development but aren't part of the development themselves. The Shuberts are mentioned because they became the co-owners and later the sole owners. Harris and Berlin are mentioned because they were the original developers.
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I'm not sure. There are 1,009 seats if you count just the orchestra, mezzanine, and boxes; the standing spots are not included in the 1,009 figure, but the orchestra pit is. Maybe
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should be italicized as the name of a full-length production. Additionally, the WL takes you to the film, but there isn't an article for the play to make a better target
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This brief section is a bit confusing, especially with the link being broken. It seems to suggest that this record is for any production, and yet I'm sure
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Those two sentences before "Development and early years" feel poorly melded into anything; is there a way to nicely rope them into the dev section?
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If the 1,009 seats are physical, then where does the 984 number come from? (The 35 orchestra pit seats bring it down to 974)
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Actually, I do know (the play transferred from the Royale Theatre), but I didn't think it was relevant initially.
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We already know that he died in 1989, so the setup here is a bit confusing, as it suggests he died closer to '94
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is referring to an arrangement where only 10 of the orchestra pit seats are used, but I can't verify this.
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First two sentences are a little proseline-y; there should be some contrast between
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Thanks again for taking a look. I've addressed all these issues now.
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The phrasing of "from another theater" suggests we don't know where
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Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the
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redundant due to setup of sentence, can just be "which"
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No commas needed around "at the second and third floors"
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colonnade is singular but "are flanked by" is plural
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