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41 Park Row is 212 feet (65 m) tall with 16 stories.. It was originally designed by George B. Post and constructed between 1888 and 1889 in the Romanesque Revival style. At the time it was composed of 13 stories, including a mezzanine above the 12th floor as well as a mansard roof covering the top
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floors. Robert Maynicke, a onetime associate of Post's, designed its four-story expansion in 1904–1905. This converted the mezzanine to a full 13th story and added three more stories. The building is the last remaining former newspaper headquarters on Printing House Square.
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The first three paragraphs of the Design section begin with "41 Park Row" – variation would be nice here, at least for one of the three (see the following comment before potentially addressing this though)
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Thanks. I have done all of these. For the Real Estate Record and Guide, I assumed that access dates weren't necessary since they were old print sources, where the digitized links are only for convenience.
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Park row should be linked in the first mention, not the second (especially since it's already done with the "41' in the infobox – unless there's a reason for this I'm missing.
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The first two paragraphs of Design are rather odd, I wonder if they can be interlaced with each other and combined into one. Something along the lines of:
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Is there something Maine granite could link to? I'm unsure what it is although I assume it is along the same lines as Indiana Limestone – would link
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is helpful? It also seems to be on the verge of OR since the source is the floor plans, meaning you're interpreting them for yourself
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In this case, it is part of the address/building name. I have worked around this so that "Park Row" is linked in the first mention.
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I was confused by your comment at first until I realized that OR was original research, not a conjunction being capitalized.
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this line seems redundant to the one before, and the printing press piece could just be merged to the preceding line
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As of 2017, floor plans show that there are four elevators and two staircases on the south side of the building.
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Alright, I've just put some comments about the sources (formatting stuff) and then we'll be good to go.
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The last two refs don't have retrieval dates but they're so old I don't know if it's even necessary?
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The 6th through 9th floors are designed such there is a single arch extending over the narrow bays
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since ref 30 is a book it needs an ISBN or OCLC – looks like archive.org has the latter listed
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Is there something "official city landmark" could link to? Maybe one of the lists in
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It could theoretically link to one of the lists, but I added a link to the redirect
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Splendid. Thank you for your diligence – great work. Passing now, congratulations!
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The printing presses were kept in place, and the new building constructed around it
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Mostly prose comments and some linking things. The biggest issue seems to be "The
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Thoughts? I just think it makes more sense and flows better something like this
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I'll do a proper source review later but for at a glance everything looks good.
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Unfortunately there's no link for it that I could find. I did link reliefs.
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I hope you're well Epicgenius, I'll pick this one up. Expect comments soon.
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Reliability looks good, just these minor things and I'll pass the review.
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I have gone with something similar, but put it in chronological order.
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the "such" sounds weird here, maybe "so" instead? This may just be me
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issue appears throughout here (btw the reason I'm thinking it's
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would be better? (For the lead link and first one in the text)
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Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the
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Thanks for the review. I've responded to these comments now.
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Should the "New York Times Publishing Company" link to
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