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poorly discussed by the news media) but this article doesn't need to go into gory details. As for conservation status, there's not much that can be said besides the speculations given in the news articles... which are far from authoritative. Anyway, I will be adding a lot more information from the research article when it's published. I have a copy, but I'm not sharing it or citing it until it's published. In the meantime, feel free to develop this as much as you can, but please don't duplicate (or contradict) the "Slow loris" article.
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