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Not that I'm aware of - Gröner usually gives the new name if it was available. It's not in Conway's or any other source I've been able to track down.
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this might be an Americanism, but should "through the end of the war" be "through to the end of the war"?
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What's the problem here? It's saying that the longer hull and the improved boilers increased her speed.
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Some kind of naval boiler, I'd guess they were manufactured by one of the Imperial dockyards (such as
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I thought it would improve the flow of the sentence, but it's not a war winner.
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what are "Marine type boilers" and should they be linked to an article?
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Just a couple of points to be addressed and she's ready for promotion.
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