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That this government in general is referred to as "Congress Poland" or "the
Congress Kingdom." The article lede says as much, but if you skip over that, you miss out. Using the term 'sejm' both for the whole group and for the lower house specifically is confusing, too. I'm going to recommend later
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Electoral Ordinance" the exact qualifications. I don't speak or read Polish, so I can
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I will rewrite that sentence, but would you have any sources for the other issues? Those topics were not mentioned in the literature I used, which I think does represent some rather significant works on that subject.
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My apologies I am not able to address all of the issues raised, but I simply no longer have access to those books (I used them a year ago at a library on a different continent I am not going back to anytime soon).
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Need to be more clear that all the members of the Sejm were called "deputies." Typically, for someone to be a deputy implies that they are only a junior member to someone else, and this in not the case here.
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It's confusing and in some cases factually wrong. (No mention is made of franchise offered only to landowners and lease-holders. Jews were forbidden from voting, etc.)
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Also, the sentence about how often the Sejm met: "Bardach gives the dates of 1818, 1820, 1823 and 1830; Jędruch lists 1825 instead of 1823" needs to be rewritten.
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In deference to your contributions, I'm devising how I can make these changes myself, rather than fail the GA review. It'll be on me from here.
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Only one image and it's far beyond copyright. It would be nice to have more and larger pictures but not necessary.
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I added another image: the title page of a public domain publication from the Sejm.
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I've made all the changes I believe are necessary and I'm ready to promote this.
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