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Hi, I've come to check this review, hope all is well with you. This isn't a person I had any knowledge of, but the article is well-written, all the review points have been met, and I'm impressed by the sources. I have one note before I'll promote this: there are two "Mark, Joshua J. (2014)" web
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Thank you for taking the time to do this review. I've addressed most of the remarks - will see about finding a source on the origin of the modern rendition of his name.
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