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The tables in this article add lots of meaningful information to this article. Article is heavy in data but I don't know of anything else that should be added to the article.
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I removed the long list of current members in the lead since it doesn't summarize the article and is already included in the sections below.
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The new decade saw the Star Alliance adding new members, but also losing some due to corporate restructuring and collapse.
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I have addressed your issues you stated in the "Expansion during 2011 and beyond" section.
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2012 was a year filled with several departures, new members, and restructurings.
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