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I would not remove the sentence about his attacks, since that is one of the few items that speaks to his character. The rest of this article is far from neutral, reading more like a speaker/musician promo. The first part of the "career" section needs some serious re-writing. I'm not sure what it's
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Have to agree, this article is a dog's breakfast; and it used to be better.... A large part of it has been swiped from Steve's site and then rewritten into unintelligibility! Anyway I'll do my bit by adding the actual date of Camp's remarriage (with an impeccable source).
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