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Chancellor Osborne's 2016 budget accurately reported what he said - I went to the transcript of the speech to verify. The remarks about the BBC and CNN are gratuitous and ridiculous. If MB considers BBC and CNN to be "slightly biased" I would love to see MB's list of unbiased sources.
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