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Thanks for your detailed review. I've addressed 1a and added a couple of books, one of which (AFAIK the only published book about
Suoyang City) is also written by Li Hongwei, who is the authority on the subject. Li is the former chief of the Guazhou archaeological department and worked on the site
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First runthrough of review completed. Still some things I need to do. I plan to compare to other UNESCO Heritage Site GA's as a benchmark for assessing the GA criteria in this case. Need to do research on completeness and these
Chinese-language sources. Overall, it's well on its way to passing!
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Not many issues - but - the issues covered in 1a should be addressed. Review of Yao and Li sources was inconclusive - I'd like to see a couple more sources found to reduce the article's dependence on those two alone. Placed on hold for now.
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minor quibbles: the first sentences of 'Location' and 'City Ruins' feel directly repetitive of the lead. Find a way to rephrase?
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