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An aviation specialist may be needed to 1) Reorganize the article so that the over-long lead is shortened and some of its content moved into the body of the article and 2)turn the (possibly dead) external links found in the lead and body into inline citations. In the case of dead links, you may want
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Hmm... I am looking more into the pre-existing image. It is not merely a poor quality image, rather it is from 2004 and from NASA; the comparatively low quality of the image is a manner of historical significance and its comparison to our more modern offering is important to offer to the reader. I
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