739:"After working with James Mercer on Broken Bells, he came to me about this Shins album. He sent references of old Eastern European book covers with skulls and psychedelic faces. So I explored three different rounds of creative. Each time getting closer to what he was looking for. In the final round, I scanned a cross cut of a rock which formed that mountain and put this spirit made of feathers on top. He immediately loved it, but thought it needed a Hopi-inspired mask because he grew up in New Mexico. So he sent me all this great inspiration and it slowly evolved into that cover. If you look closely we’ve filled that smoke coming down the mountain with naked ladies at James’ request. It’s pure Hopi psychedelic spookiness." → use your own words interpolated with the quote.
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Talked to the nominator. Looks like an article he nommed and planned to work on, but never got around to it because of other projects. I am therefore requesting it be failed. I have received the nominator's permission. It needs a whole section on its release and I don't think that's feasible within
701:"The German imagery found on Port of Morrow was inspired by avant-garde pop, artists such as Faust and Can, as well as Brian Eno's production work" → The German imagery found on Port of Morrow was inspired by "avant-garde pop" artists such as Faust and Can, as well as Brian Eno's production work.
588:"Co-produced by Greg Kurstin and frontman James Mercer, the album was released March 20, 2012 on Aural Apothecary and Columbia Records" → The album was released March 20, 2012, on Aural Apothecary and Columbia Records and was co-produced by Greg Kurstin and frontman James Mercer.
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Lead single "Simple Song" charted within the top ten on the alternative charts → The lead single "Simple Song" charted within the top ten on the alternative charts (which alternative charts? + link lead
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the article has some good information but it's a bit distorted and I made some amends, however after you address everything I want you to submit it to
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The album was ranked #48 on
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