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No improvements have been made to this article since the beginning of this review three weeks ago. I consider the good article criteria are not met with regard to certain prose issues, the referencing and the lead section as mentioned above.
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The lead section of this article requires expansion so that it adequately summarises the rest of the content. I have put this review on hold for one week.
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The references are consistent with each other in style and that is good. However they do not conform with the
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