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A short time later, his lawyer met with town officials, at De Niro's direction, and offered them withdrawal of the suit and $ 129,000 in reimbursement for the town's legal bills, paid by the accounting firm. " made it very clear that De Niro didn't want to screw the town, that he didn't know about
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playing Ada, the French wife of De Niro's
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De Niro quickly directed his lawyer, Tom Harvey, to withdraw the suit and reimburse the town's legal bills of $ 129,000. Harvey conveyed to
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