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813:"Ilse Hess moved in 1945 to Hindelang. She was arrested by the French in May 1945 but was not charged. Released after two weeks, she was arrested again—this time by the Americans—and was not released until March 1948. Wolf Rüdiger Hess spent this period in the care of his grandmother, but was allowed to stay for an extended visit with his mother in the women's Labour and Internment Camp at Göggingen for Christmas in 1947" Same as above, its unrelated to Hess
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The way you tweeked the prose I now understand what you meant. There were multiple
Freicorps; it was a generic term. I have amended the prose to try to make it clearer. See what you think. --
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Minor note - AFAIK Freikorps wasn't exactly a centralized movement, but the wording in "World War I" kinda implies otherwise. --
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I also pointed out some other problems below, mainly to do with criteria 3b, unneccessary detail. Thanks!
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