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Ok one more thing that I've been thinking about today. I don't thing, "Ranks given for track events are within the athlete's heat only" and "Ranks given for track events are within the athlete's heat only" should be included in the "Key" table (for both sets of tables) since the note is not really a
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Who knows. With these smaller, and frankly, non-competitive countries it is usually through universality invitations, though such information has long since been lost to the corners of the Web -- coming back ten years later, most of the sources that might could have told us this are gone.
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Change the first sentence in the lead to include when the olympics were held. Also, change "sent a delegation" to "competed". This is just to keep consistency between other olympic articles I have reviewed in the
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Almost everything looks good, just one more thing. In the "Canoeing" section, the key table says "Ranks given for track events are within the athlete's heat only". I don't think you mean to say "track events"?--
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Huh, the first sentence says Beijing? And all the ones I've written say "sent a delegation" since we're writing about the team here (See rarities like
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Why is there a subsection (Sprint) for the table but the Athletics section does not have any subsections? I don't think the subsection is needed.
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Between the "Qualification Legend" and the "Key" table in the Athletics table, pick one format and use it for both (to keep consistency).
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Lol editing on a phone does suck...but it looks like you managed it (will pass the article tomorrow)! ;P --
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The article you linked to uses "competed". Regarding the date, take a look at an article like
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For the "Key" table, only include the Keys that are actually used in the tables.
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Removed, given they didn't participate in the other disciplines of canoeing.
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Mention the names of the competitors and their respective events in the lead.
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Overall good work! Just gotta polish off some edges. On hold for 7 days.--
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Yes, though adding that wording in it more difficult than I thought.
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Thanks for taking it on, hopefully it is mostly to your liking!
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How did the athletes qualify for their respective events?
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