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Description section. Good job!
1144:"T. grallator lives beneath the leaves of plants, where they spin a much reduced web.". Reduced compared to what? This could also be combined with the next sentence, i.e. "T. grallator lives beneath the leaves of plants, where they spin a much reduced two-dimensional web."
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Hi, I came by to promote this. The insect is very hard to see, green on green, at thumbnail size, so this won't run with an image. Why don't you add hook interest by calling it by its common name? That would certainly draw clicks.
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Gillespie, Rosemary G. (1989). "Diet-Induced Color Change in the
Hawaiian Happy-Face Spider Theridion grallator, (Araneae, Theridiidae)". The Journal of Arachnology. 17 (2): 171–177. ISSN 0161-8202
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