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Unfortunately, I'm going to have to fail the article as it does not meet the GA criteria at the moment and there has been no progress or response in the 12 days since the review began. Please feel free to message me if you have any questions about my comments above, and to renominate the article once
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Is there any information about how many sales the book got, or how much money Trump received, in any years prior to 2016 (particularly 2006/2007)?
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Though the review is over, I've carried out some of these changes myself, and struck them. The rest could still be made to improve the article.
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Is the exact chapter number 24? We can say this if it's true, even if the cited reference doesn't (with the book itself as a primary source).
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