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Minor point, the coordinates of the entrance to the hospital vice the largest building should probably be used for such a large complex, e.g. 40.466333, -79.952838 would be better. This is the convention for other complexes of buildings.
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It has been great working with you. I hope we can work together again soon. Thank you for your help, as this was my first nom for GA and I didn't really know how the process went. Thank you,
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I think the history of this hospital sounds really interesting and could be expanded. Both references provide more in-depth information. Don't be afraid to re-use references or check out
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As of 2020, UPMC Children's
Hospital of Pittsburgh has placed nationally in all 10 ranked pediatric specialties on U.S. News and World Report and placed 8th overall on the honor roll.
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Before starting this review, I left a message on the nominator's talk page regarding my concerns re: the neutrality of this article. I have reason to believe this article was
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information comes out of nowhere. Maybe begin with the hiring of Dr. Thomas E. Starzl etc. or research conducted prior to the surgery.
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Children's has been consistently ranked among the nation's top pediatric hospitals by US News since 1990.
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Pittsburgh: Price Of New
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I clipped some newspaper article for you in case they may be useful:
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for taking the time to undo their work and make this a good article.
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