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Most appear to have been trapped in the ship when it sank, but I have found several contradictory figures for the number of men who were trapped inside, so I just left it at the total casualty numbers.
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DANFS doesn't state whether there was a formal organization (and that might cause some confusion between that and the Atlantic Fleet), so I'd rather not go further than the source.
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While en route to Mexico, Utah was ordered to intercept the German-flagged steamer SS Ypiranga on 16 April, which was carrying arms to the Mexican dictator Victoriano Huerta.
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Lenihan was one of the memorial cites, now renamed to be clearer. Breyer is in the further reading section now.
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Um, I meant to ask if their bodies were retrieved and buried elsewhere or not? The article does not say.--
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Yes, but I see how that can be unclear. Changed to "Ypiranga's arrival"
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The ship's arrival in Veracruz prompted the US to occupy the city;...
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Great article. There's really little to do to clear this review.--
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