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By my understanding, not directly related to the WWII, but increased oil consumption and lack of conventional oil supply are definitely reasons behind of oil shale industry developments of this period. A 80 ton per day plant is not significant for the oil industry in general, but compared with other
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Regardless, the hook would pass. But there are prose issues in the article that need to be dealt with before this passes. In the first line of the first paragraph after the lead, English use would prefer "resources" to resource. The second sentence of the second paragraph reads "to consists" instead
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Date, length, and citations ok. No neutrality tags or plagiarism issues. The hook is supported by its source, but I wonder if we can't find something more unique to grab people's attention. Is a 80 ton per day plant special in some way? I see the dates line up exactly with WWII in Europe. Was this
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of "to consist." Under "Recent activities" it should either read "A new strategy was" or "New strategies were," not "New strategy was". These kinds of errors run throughout. Get a copyedit, and I see no reason this shouldn't pass.
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I did a copyedit - not creating brilliant prose but I think it's mostly OK now. Might I suggest this alt hook: That over 53 billion
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oil-shale operations of this time, it is worth of mentioning. I propose also ALT1 for the hook.
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The following discussion is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below.
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Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as
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