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I did not think it was serious enough to worry. I usually call out small things prior to promotion make the administrator who promotes to queue aware that I am checking thoroughly. If it is an issue they will call for changes with pings. I hope you continue to contribute great articles to DYK. I
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if I couldn't find a second source, but you encouraged me to look and it's improved the article! Thank you again, I appreciate your work on the admin side of things.
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