150:. While the history section has no pictures, the transport section has too many. While in FAC, people may accuse you of writing only good things about the city. You need to add more negative details like traffic congestion, sex trade, smuggling, etc. All the places and names of buildings and airport (in short ALL proper nouns) should be wikilinked (internal linking). Also take care to see that they are wiki-linked only once, during their first appearence in the article. There should, ideally, be no references in the
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page. Substitution of /t/ with /Īø/ is not correct. Further the occurrence of /Å/ in the transcription is patently wrong. It should be /ŹĢ/. The I-breve in the first syllable is also unncessary, I feel. I don't need to say that stress marks are given at ridiculously wrong places. I can correct it, if
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From one of your edit summary on the
Thiruvananthapuram page I guess you modified the IPA transcript for the name Thiruvananthapuram. Please note that the audible pronunciation and IPA transcript do not correspond in this case. As I leave this message, the IPA transcript is /tÄr'Å«vÉnÅn'tÉpur'Ém/. The
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Rajith, the "Strategic
Importance" section is unnecessary in the article. It needs to be merged with other sections. For example, the part on medicines and ayurveda can me reworded and added into the Economy section, saying tourism is a prominent income generator in the city. The air link to maldives
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I wasnt able to participate in any of the peer reviews. There are some problems with the article that needs to be addressed on a war-footing now, as it is in FAC. I feel guilty of pointing these out at this crucial hour. But please take care of them. The "demographics" section is too short, and needs
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So starting with the lead - There are a lot of examples of unknowingly including text which glorifies the city, and hence makes the article un-encyclopedic. Examples of such text are "lovely beach side city", "political nerve centre", "major academic hub", "premier educational institutions", "first
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I think you did a good work, but the article fell short as you didn't have much experience. The article is lacking, but not much. As I said in the SAC, it is a good copyedit and a couple of citations away from getting selected. FAC is still a far cry, but we give critical reviews early so that once
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I fail to understand your reply. Those who can't read IPA script needn't read it. There is the audio file. Digestability is no reason to give palpable error. In fact, the form at issue is not "simple phonetics" as you say and it has been made complicated with unnecessary breve and misplaced stress
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Information technology park of its kind", "home to many of the world's leading technology companies". Now this is just the lead. The lead must be worked upon. Try and do it yourself. If not, then I will help you do it. I am sort of busy till monday, after which I can devote time to the article. -
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You look like a newbie in the Web to be tempted by this deceitful site. Original (like several) is a word very often misunderstood by
Indians. I am afraid you may have been misled to believe it due to this wrong notion. There is not a single link on that website to suggest that it is the Tourism
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the things start rolling, it eventually become a featured article. I will give a suggestion. Work on one problem at a time. This will make you end up with great results without stressing too much. Try asking for help from other editors. I can only help after a week as I will be out-of-station. ā
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Potential future growth areas include
Tourism (medical and eco-tourism), civil aviation and air-cargo, commercial activity through upcoming port (at Vizhinjam), software development parks, media and the arts, rubber-based industries, etc. Much of this high potential growth would depend on the
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Hello. There are some basic problems with the article. 2 main issues - 1) the article needs to be toned down a bit to make it neutral and 2) references need to be checked more rigorously. Besides that, the prose can be improved. To start with, I would like to ask you to take a look at
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Raith, this is not a revert war; this is a content dispute. pls see my discussion in culutre page.If you want to build consensus, then the edit in question has to be deleted and only reinstated only after the discussion; & not the other way around; So pls revert it to previous
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Sorry if those late comments created too much trouble. What happened was that I had removed most of the Kerala articles from my watchlist as I am concentrating in some other sections, and hadn't noticed the FAC. I noticed it only because of
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I have classified the page list of people from kerala. I think its the betterway to search and findout informations.Tks for adding balamani amma.I like her poetry.It contains the smell of sweet motherhood. Best wishes to u and ur friends.
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Google search engine has not learnt to think yet. Indian official sites recently have changed to .in suffix. Please don't refer to it in the article until you verify it. If my negative attitude helps improve the article, why should you
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That was not a website of the
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Thank you for pointing it out. I will surely make the changes. What the page currently needs is some pics, am in the process of searching for it. Any help is welcome.
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