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BlankVerse, I am new to editing
Knowledge (XXG) pages and am still sruggling with procedures of this site. I will read more about editing on this site. But one thing I do know is about a community called Wilshire Center. I have been an active member of this community for the past 20 years. I am
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on your website is not bad, although for the purposes of the
Knowledge (XXG), it would be much better to have the adjacent communities identified. A larger map that shows the relative closeness of Wilshire Center to Downtown LA is what would be the best,
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To be quite honest, what you added to the
Wilshire article was not usable without serious rewriting, so it may be better to start with a blank slate, writing with the Knowledge (XXG) in mind. Remember that the Knowledge (XXG) is an
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I found on your website the definitions that the city of LA uses for both
Wilshire Center and Koreatown. That info should be added to the Knowledge (XXG) articles. (I forgot to record the URL, but I think it was in one of the
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I assume that you meant excerpted. If much of the text was from those publications, then they are the ones who own the copyright and would need to grant permission for inclusions in the
Knowledge (XXG).
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restrictions, if any are applied. The licenses specifically can not have
Noncommercial or No Derivative Works restrictions if they are to be used on the Knowledge (XXG).
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If you have any photographs, drawings or maps for the article, that would be great. The only photo in the article currently is, in my opinion, not very informative.
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Executive Director of the Wilshire Center Business Improvement Corp. and own the copyright to the name Wilshire Center. We own all rights to
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