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Secondly, using the Fact Sheet as a source has led to a certain bias emerging within the articles. An encyclopedia entry should remain neutral and present only facts we can verify in reliable sources. The FAA are clearly supportive of the NGATS but
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article and left a note on the talk page. If you take a look at this you might consider it worthwhile to reword the other article ledes along the same lines to make the first thing people read more encyclopedic. Essentially a good guide is to ensure the first sentence or two answers the questions
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