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autism rights advocates,” which is clearly true and backed up by reliable sources. I feel that this is a much more solid and consistent framing of controversies surrounding ABA. As for why I have not been swayed by the messages on the talk page, A number of their sources talk about private equity firms, which is less a controversy about ABA itself and more involving coverage of mental health issues in general. Also I would hesitate to state that researchers raising issues with ABA as “controversy” in the sense that disputes in academia happen all the time on nearly every subject. Scholarly debate is natural for almost any subject so insisting that it be included in the lead seems pedantic and a bit misleading. In fact, some of the research articles appear to be in response to other scholars arguing in favor of ABA, such as the
Sandoval-Norton piece, so there is clearly a back-and-forth debate in this sphere rather than universal repudiation, at this point. Something “controversial” would usually extend outside scholarly articles which the average person does not have access or would be privy to. I don’t see how the article is done a disservice by stating that ABA is controversial among autistic rights advocates. Not only is it a fact, but it also describes the source of the overwhelming majority of controversies and dialogue surrounding ABA. There are one or two opinion articles cited that include usually one or two non-autistic individuals, but they mainly resort to covering the concerns of autistic individuals and their concerns. The Controversies section does not cover any group that ABA is controversial with outside of autistic rights advocates and a few select researchers. If I recall I was not the only one who took the position that evidence for controversy “outside” the autism rights movement was weak, but even if there were sources that talked at length about non-autistic opposition movements against ABA, the fact remains that it would probably be undue in several aspects to mention it in the lead. One of the tenets that WP:UNDUE states is that the “prominence of placement” of something in an article can make it a violation of the undue weight, and I simply cannot say that the lead should state that controversy “outside” the autistic community exists in a notable fashion when it seems to be a very small proportion compared to ABA detractors who are within the autistic community. If we can find a number of outside groups, NGOs, governments, prominent non-autistic figures taking positions on ABA, then perhaps I can see the view that would indicate that there is mass controversy outside the autistic rights movement. I think as it stands, simply stating “especially the autistic rights movement” should be the way forward, as it is clearly backed up by most reliable sources and it is the best summary of the contents of the article currently. Also, one user on Project Med brought up the point that attempting to mention that it is even controversial among the autistic “community” would probably violate
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Austism Rights Movement on this controversy. Some organizations have opined on things like shock collars, but these are not uses exclusively in ABA practices and opposition to them is universal with regards to their application. So that is my rationale for “mainly.” To be honest, I have been looking to disengage with this article for some time but cannot seem to find an easy way out. I suggested a DRN but if one is made I do not think I would be apt to engage in it simply due to my desire for some peace of mind. I would hope more users can provide alternative perspective.
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