450:
italicised); and 29 (I have the title down as "The Reds
Official Web Site", its title in my browser is "THE REDS OFFICIAL WEB SITE", though I believe the convention is to replace all-caps with title casing. Does the name display differently for you, or is it the casing thing just?). Going to bed for now but I'll check for further instances of what you've noted tomorrow evening.
410:
inconsistently listed editors or directors, could you be specific with where this is? Editors are all listed using the relevant fields in the citation templates, which always spits out "Surname, Forename. ed."; and I believe anyone credited as a director in has been listed "Forename
Surname (director)". Then again, it's three AM and I might have missed something
449:
Will give it another look through tomorrow, but have grabbed everything you've mentioned specifically for now - except FN 14 (I removed italics from it earlier, if that's what you're referring to, unless you feel they should be restored? The A.V. Club is a web-only source, not sure that's meant to be
295:
Done. Reducing "in order to" to "to" can come across as very terse and can make a sentence harder to read. I think this is why "in order to" is so common even in formal writing. However, I have reduced both instances. I'm not sure whether "a ride" is colloquial or simply AmE, but I've changed it to
196:
culture. The last FAC failed due to there still being possible sources which hadn't been vetted for use, these have now been reviewed (and rejected as redundant to the material already present). Images have been used sparingly but I'm open to adding more free images if this is seen as a detriment.
434:
FN 7 for editor, 78 for director (and 64 is strange too, and 21 vs 45, possible others). Still several hyphen/dash issues, repeating and sometimes contradictory publishers (ex. FN 49), 14 and 15 are still inconsistent, 29 still misses the actual title of the cited page (though now includes work),
195:
I am nominating this for featured article because, after two peer reviews, two GOCE cop-edits and two previous FACs, I believe it ticks all the criteria. A neo-noir box office flop which seem directly responsible for the increasing popularity of both forensic science and criminal profiling in pop
409:
Thanks for combing over this. I removed the Ain't It Cool News ref and the associated text, having found that the author has had his journalistic integrity questioned in the past. I think I've addressed the other concerns, but I've quite possibly missed a few. I'm not sure, though, where I've
277:- with regard to FA criterion 1a. There is a little redundancy, e.g. "in order to", where just "to" will suffice, and I would prefer to see "a ride" expanded a little – it's a little too colloquial for my tastes. I have watched this film many times, thank you for an engaging contribution.
497:
Although I'm not sure what the page title is meant to be (I'm only seeing the "The Reds
Official Web Site" bit and nothing more), I've changed the title to the title of the interview given in the text, rather than on the browser tab. If that's not what you meant then it can be reverted.
474:
Our article does italicize AV Club, but I'll leave that to your discretion - what I was looking at there was the date formatting, and the inconsistent italicization which has been addressed. For 29, that's the name of the
612:
128:
123:
118:
224:
Ha! First one on an FAC for once! I've just made a few grammatical edits to the article, but otherwise I have no objections. It's very well-written and informative.
40:
547:
I had a look through commons, and found the following free images which might be of use, in descending order of which ones I think would work best:
535:
Good work, even if light on images (I'm used to see these movie articles trying to become more illustrated through every free image possible).
556:
230:
30:
17:
88:
83:
92:
75:
145:
634:
606:
582:
542:
517:
492:
469:
444:
429:
404:
345:
325:
305:
286:
268:
246:
215:
187:
395:
Be consistent in whether web sources are cited using website name or base URL, and if the latter whether these are italicized.
150:
435:
still italicization problems (ex FN 14). That being said, sleep is probably more vital than addressing formatting issues.
560:
241:
552:
602:
594:? And Grapple, if you'd had a source spotcheck on a previous FAC, please link it-- otherwise pending.
539:
79:
615:, The images dealt with there are still the only images currently used in the article, if that helps.
488:
440:
400:
341:
282:
264:
235:
225:
625:
573:
508:
460:
420:
206:
178:
611:
Source spotcheck has not been carried out in previews FACs, but an image review was performed in
548:
595:
563:. If general opinion is that more images is better, then I can slot one or two of these in.
536:
71:
64:
484:
436:
396:
337:
278:
260:
616:
564:
499:
451:
411:
321:
301:
296:"a lift". Wikt doesn't mark either as colloquial or regional, but I hope this is OK. --
197:
169:
380:
53:
109:
317:
297:
256:
376:
366:
Be consistent in whether directors are listed first or last name first
39:
Subsequent comments should be made on the article's talk page or in
483:
on the site that you're citing (you're right about the casing).
613:
Knowledge:Featured article candidates/Manhunter (film)/archive1
336:- spotchecks not done, no comment on source comprehensiveness.
155:
105:
101:
97:
57:
129:
Featured article candidates/Manhunter (film)/archive3
124:
Featured article candidates/Manhunter (film)/archive2
119:
Featured article candidates/Manhunter (film)/archive1
644:The above discussion is preserved as an archive.
312:I've just heard "lift" used in an American film (
43:. No further edits should be made to this page.
351:FN 4 and similar should use endash, not hyphen
650:No further edits should be made to this page.
29:The following is an archived discussion of a
8:
357:FN 7 and similar need not repeat publisher
316:) so I suppose it's not just BrE. Good. --
134:
41:Knowledge talk:Featured article candidates
354:Be consistent in how editors are notated
137:
116:
557:File:10.17.09TomNoonanByLuigiNovi.jpg
18:Knowledge:Featured article candidates
7:
360:Compare formatting on FNs 14 and 15
24:
369:FN 29: check title vs publisher
1:
255:- No issues were revealed by
635:16:06, 31 January 2012 (UTC)
607:15:55, 31 January 2012 (UTC)
583:05:10, 25 January 2012 (UTC)
561:File:WilliamPetersen2007.png
543:04:00, 25 January 2012 (UTC)
518:23:59, 23 January 2012 (UTC)
493:04:34, 23 January 2012 (UTC)
470:03:34, 23 January 2012 (UTC)
445:03:12, 23 January 2012 (UTC)
430:02:52, 23 January 2012 (UTC)
405:02:40, 22 January 2012 (UTC)
346:02:40, 22 January 2012 (UTC)
326:10:36, 5 February 2012 (UTC)
306:11:02, 21 January 2012 (UTC)
287:10:09, 21 January 2012 (UTC)
269:09:43, 21 January 2012 (UTC)
247:00:57, 20 January 2012 (UTC)
216:21:38, 19 January 2012 (UTC)
188:21:38, 19 January 2012 (UTC)
31:featured article nomination
667:
647:Please do not modify it.
56:21:42, 11 February 2012
36:Please do not modify it.
553:File:BrianCox07TIFF.jpg
479:, but not the specific
386:Check italicization
549:File:Reddragon.jpg
363:FN 17: punctuation
631:
622:
579:
570:
514:
505:
466:
457:
426:
417:
372:FN 30: publisher?
212:
203:
191:
184:
175:
163:
162:
658:
649:
632:
627:
623:
618:
599:
580:
575:
571:
566:
515:
510:
506:
501:
467:
462:
458:
453:
427:
422:
418:
413:
253:Copyscape search
244:
238:
233:
228:
213:
208:
204:
199:
185:
180:
176:
171:
166:
135:
113:
95:
72:Manhunter (film)
65:Manhunter (film)
48:The article was
38:
666:
665:
661:
660:
659:
657:
656:
655:
654:
645:
626:
617:
597:
574:
565:
509:
500:
461:
452:
421:
412:
381:reliable source
379:a high-quality
242:
236:
231:
226:
207:
198:
179:
170:
133:
86:
70:
68:
34:
22:
21:
20:
12:
11:
5:
664:
662:
653:
652:
640:
639:
638:
637:
588:
587:
586:
585:
530:
529:
528:
527:
526:
525:
524:
523:
522:
521:
520:
393:
390:
387:
384:
373:
370:
367:
364:
361:
358:
355:
352:
331:
330:
329:
328:
309:
308:
290:
289:
250:
249:
193:
192:
168:Nominator(s):
161:
160:
159:
158:
156:External links
153:
148:
140:
139:
132:
131:
126:
121:
115:
67:
62:
61:
46:
45:
25:
23:
15:
14:
13:
10:
9:
6:
4:
3:
2:
663:
651:
648:
642:
641:
636:
633:
630:
624:
621:
614:
610:
609:
608:
604:
600:
593:
590:
589:
584:
581:
578:
572:
569:
562:
558:
554:
550:
546:
545:
544:
541:
538:
534:
531:
519:
516:
513:
507:
504:
496:
495:
494:
490:
486:
482:
478:
473:
472:
471:
468:
465:
459:
456:
448:
447:
446:
442:
438:
433:
432:
431:
428:
425:
419:
416:
408:
407:
406:
402:
398:
394:
391:
388:
385:
382:
378:
374:
371:
368:
365:
362:
359:
356:
353:
350:
349:
348:
347:
343:
339:
335:
334:Source review
327:
323:
319:
315:
311:
310:
307:
303:
299:
294:
293:
292:
291:
288:
284:
280:
276:
273:
272:
271:
270:
266:
262:
258:
254:
248:
245:
239:
234:
229:
223:
220:
219:
218:
217:
214:
211:
205:
202:
190:
189:
186:
183:
177:
174:
165:
164:
157:
154:
152:
149:
147:
144:
143:
142:
141:
136:
130:
127:
125:
122:
120:
117:
114:
111:
107:
103:
99:
94:
90:
85:
81:
77:
73:
66:
63:
60:
58:
55:
51:
44:
42:
37:
32:
27:
26:
19:
646:
643:
628:
619:
592:Image review
591:
576:
567:
532:
511:
502:
480:
476:
463:
454:
423:
414:
392:FN 45: page?
389:What is SIU?
333:
332:
314:Bugsy Malone
313:
274:
252:
251:
221:
209:
200:
194:
181:
172:
167:
151:Citation bot
69:
49:
47:
35:
28:
537:igordebraga
375:What makes
279:Graham Colm
261:Graham Colm
485:Nikkimaria
437:Nikkimaria
397:Nikkimaria
338:Nikkimaria
259:searches.
243:talk to me
257:Copyscape
146:Analysis
50:promoted
620:GRAPPLE
598:Georgia
568:GRAPPLE
533:Support
503:GRAPPLE
455:GRAPPLE
415:GRAPPLE
275:Support
222:Support
201:GRAPPLE
173:GRAPPLE
138:Toolbox
89:protect
84:history
54:Raul654
559:, and
232:change
93:delete
596:Sandy
227:Inter
110:views
102:watch
98:links
16:<
603:Talk
489:talk
481:page
477:site
441:talk
401:talk
377:this
342:talk
322:talk
318:Stfg
302:talk
298:Stfg
283:talk
265:talk
237:able
106:logs
80:talk
76:edit
52:by
605:)
555:,
551:,
491:)
443:)
403:)
344:)
324:)
304:)
285:)
267:)
108:|
104:|
100:|
96:|
91:|
87:|
82:|
78:|
59:.
33:.
629:X
601:(
577:X
540:≠
512:X
487:(
464:X
439:(
424:X
399:(
383:?
340:(
320:(
300:(
281:(
263:(
240:|
210:X
182:X
112:)
74:(
Text is available under the Creative Commons Attribution-ShareAlike License. Additional terms may apply.