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457:"A lifetime achievement award, named after the father of Indian cinema Dadasaheb Phalke, was awarded to a film personality for outstanding contribution to the growth and development of Indian Cinema". The phrase "father of Indian cinema" is not needed here. Also, second part of the sentence is grammatically incorrect.
215:"Deool in Marathi language and Byari in Beary language shared the award for the Best Feature Film. Byari was the first-ever film made in the Beary language, and the only film in the language at the time of the awards." aren't good sentences. How about "The Marathi film
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239:"The award for the Best Non-Feature Film was given to theHindi—English documentary And We Play On." There is a minor spacing issue there, and why is an endash used here. "Hindi-English" should be hyphenated.
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For the "Jury" sub-section in the "Feature Films" section, the profession of all the other members are mentioned except for the ones who are heading the different regions.
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the same period were eligible to contest for the best writing on cinema section." I am sure of this one. But, the sentence doesn't read well.
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