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I'm looking for comments on what kind of information could be added to make the article more complete. (Suggest section headers?) Comments regarding bad grammar are also welcome. How far off GA is the article? Thank you for your time!
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A section about the structure and design of the stadium would be useful i.e that the stadium is a continuous oval bowl etc. What is the section which juts out in the lower half of
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A promising start, but to reach GA, the article needs to be more comprehensive and better referenced. For ideas, there are two featured and two GA articles about stadiums:
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On March 21, 1954 a new official attendance record was set in the game between Brazil and Paraguay match, as 183,513 spectators entered the stadium with a ticket
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Brazil beat Mexico with a final score 4-0, with Ademir becoming the first scorer of a competitive goal at the stadium with his 30th minute strike
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Brazil beat Mexico 4-0, Ademir becoming the first scorer of a competitive goal at the stadium with his strike in the 30th minute
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Put the "Construction", "Opening", "Post World Cup years", and "Modern day" as subsections to the main "History" section.
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The official attendance of the game was 173,830, however, the actual attendance was estimated to be closer to 210,000
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The official attendance of the game was 173,830, with the actual attendance estimated to be about 210,000
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Well it certainly has a lot of GA potential. Could use copyediting and less point of view. Comments:
210: 109: 93: 57: 180: 214: 257: 229:? There appears to be some form of track in the stadium, what is it used for? 159:- The two parts of the sentence aren't opposed to each other. Reword to 116:...leading to the death of three supporters, and 50 more being injured 126:...,which resulted in the Corinthians winning the game on penalties. 84:...three big football clubs in Rio: Botafogo, Flamengo and Fluminese 167:
However, the widely used nickname of Maracanã continued to be used
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Notes should be separated from the references to avoid confusion.
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On June 16, 1950, the opening match of the stadium took place
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Knowledge (XXG):Peer review
Estádio do Maracanã
Estádio do Maracanã
GilbertoSilvaFan
15:48, 23 March 2007 (UTC)
WP:DATE
WP:NPOV
cite templates
Michaelas10

16:10, 23 March 2007 (UTC)
GilbertoSilvaFan
18:41, 23 March 2007 (UTC)
City of Manchester Stadium
Dr Pepper Ballpark
Arsenal Stadium
Gaylord Family Oklahoma Memorial Stadium
Image:Maracana Stadium.jpg
Oldelpaso
10:23, 31 March 2007 (UTC)

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