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This is the second peer review for the article. I was just dissapointed with how little look-over it actually got. Please make your comments; fresh eyes welcome. Any general status comments wanted!
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First it makes no sense, then why can't the footnote be at the end of the sentence? Why is an abbreviation used "eg"? Also some unsourced statements come off as
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section be expanded? Secondly I would like to see some information on how it was adopted. Also it needs a copyedit because some parts dont make sense, example:
96: 72: 43: 31: 17: 60:"Paragraphs traditionally in Article I, eg, the banning of ex post facto laws is in Article IV "Legislative." 80: 39: 63: 92: 67: 88: 66:, example: "New Jersey's constitution is often a target of criticism." 8: 7: 28: 1: 97:01:33, 27 November 2006 (UTC) 73:00:21, 27 November 2006 (UTC) 44:22:51, 26 November 2006 (UTC) 32:New Jersey State Constitution 22:New Jersey State Constitution 18:Knowledge (XXG):Peer review 113: 83:peer review suggestions 49:Previous Peer Review 70: 42: 104: 68: 56:Defunct Versions 38: 112: 111: 107: 106: 105: 103: 102: 101: 95: 35: 26: 25: 24: 12: 11: 5: 110: 108: 100: 99: 91: 76: 75: 34: 29: 27: 15: 14: 13: 10: 9: 6: 4: 3: 2: 109: 98: 94: 90: 86: 82: 78: 77: 74: 71: 65: 61: 57: 53: 52: 51: 50: 46: 45: 41: 33: 30: 23: 19: 59: 55: 47: 36: 79:Please see 87:. Thanks, 69:- Tutmosis 81:automated 64:analysis 54:Can the 20:‎ | 16:< 85:here 40:Evan 89:AZ 93:t

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Knowledge (XXG):Peer review
New Jersey State Constitution
New Jersey State Constitution
Evan
22:51, 26 November 2006 (UTC)
Previous Peer Review
analysis
- Tutmosis
00:21, 27 November 2006 (UTC)
automated
here
AZ
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01:33, 27 November 2006 (UTC)

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