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I've listed this article for peer review because I've completely overhauled it, and I would like to get it to at least GA quality. I believe that all the information that needs to be on the page is there in some form or another, I would just like to get the prose and grammar perfect, which can be
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I understand what you are saying here, but there is not much else to state about the other postings. Most of the postings were rather low-profile except
Daisuke's. Ichiro's posting is over 8 years old now and it is hard to find information about the posting and bid.
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This is a bit short for GA, so one way of expanding it would be to have more on each case (as is done for the three cases in the history already).
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Interesting article and good start on the way to GA, but still needs some work. Here are some suggestions for improvement:
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hard when there are so many names, terms and technical jargon to juggle around. Any help perfecting it would be great!
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Ichiro Suzuki was the first high-profile NPB player to use the posting system.
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Does this work in reverse - MLB to NPB? (and the answer is no, btw :)
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the posting system presumably was meant to solve both problems.
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