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subst:PR/archive I've listed this article for peer review because I am a student at Boston
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The "Research directions" section could also be combined into a "Function" section, but be careful with the tone of this section. Statements like "researchers hope to give more time and attention to the SGCs" and "X will likely be explored and definitively characterized" and "Y must also be
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