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1001:, "should be written in a clear, accessible style", standing "on its own as a concise overview of the article's topic". WP:LEDE states that "significant information should not appear in the lead if it is not covered in the remainder of the article", which I believe basically means that, if an assertion in the intro requires an inline citation there, then it shouldn't be there. Either the assertion should be dropped from the lead, or the assertion should be stated with inline citation somewhere in the body of the article and only summarized in the lead, without citation. Likewise, I honestly believe there should be no inline citations at all in the actual summary, because Knowledge's article on the Spanish Civil War must surely include adequately support for the big takeaways relevant for the WWII article's summary (and in fact the SCW article includes 473 inline citations to something like 100 sources). And IMHO it would probably be inappropriate in the WWII article to be making any unusual, likely-to-be-doubted assertion about the SCW that would in fact require a citation. 206: 174: 984:
by the inline citations (only some specialist would want to see them, and the material for them is in the subarticle instead); and it appears to be just a selection of several facts from several of the article's sources, rather than a proper synthesis of what's known on the topic. (And as if none of the article's sources is a history book general enough to cover these several statements!) It would surely be better to cite one or a few general treatments of the SCW in one cluster at the end of the actual summary, which I think would suggest that each of them more or less supports all of the statements.
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the subarticle's lead as the content in the summary section"). And by my reading, WP:LEDE suggests that a lead should usually not include citations. And no examples that I see in WP:SUMMARY include citations. BUT, there is no explicit statement that a summary need not include citations, and there are no examples given making this point (i.e. no pointer to any Featured or other real article with good summaries not encumbered by citations).
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parent article and enough information about the broader parent subject to place the subject in context for the reader, even if this produces some duplication between the parent and child articles. The original article should contain a section with a summary of the subtopic's article as well as a link to it. (...) It is advisable to develop new material in a subtopic article before summarizing it in the parent article.
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encyclopedic article in its own right and contains its own lead section that is quite similar to the summary in the parent article. It also contains a link back to the parent article, and enough information about the broader parent subject to place the subject in context for the reader, even if this produces some duplication between the parent and child articles.
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table row, say, that no one is checking whether everything in each table row is exactly supported by the one source appearing. Rather, I think that an editor has dutifully pasted in one corresponding source for each, to fend off dogmatic others who insist upon it. And it would be more honest to show no source, thereby implying all of the subarticles' sources.
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exceptions, every Knowledge article must be able to stand alone. Which means that all passages (although perhaps not the lead), including summary sections, must be supported by references to reliable sources. I further think that is a view widely held among editors, and it is perhaps why the editors at WWII have made it into a poorly written article, IMHO.
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And it has been a problem for me previously and again now, that I can't find explicit statement that a list-article in which items are summaries of linked articles, does not need to have a hedgehog of citations. In practice, I think that in list-articles where one source has been inserted for each
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Is the current WP:SUMMARY adequate in conveying that a summary can really be a summary, rather than a selection of a few assertions? I think not. By my reading, WP:SUMMARY does suggest that an article summary might simply be a transclusion of the lead of a sub-article ("it can be convenient to use
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Here, each sentence is followed by an inline citation, it feels like. Or at least it is apparent that each sentence is supported by the next one coming of the passage's multiple (three) inline citations. Frankly, I do not like this "actual text": it seems choppy, as a general reader I am irritated
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I'm having a discussion with other editors about, basically: does a blurb in a table row in a list-article, which summarizes a linked article, have to include one, some, or all of the inline references in the linked article? I have turned to wp:SUMMARY, seeking a flat statement giving guidance and
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getting too long. It appears the recommended action is to take most of the details out and put them in smaller articles covering shorter time periods. Each smaller article would have to refer back to the parent article, which would seem to be a use for the main template. At the same time, the brief
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A fuller treatment of any major subtopic should go in a separate article of its own. Each subtopic or child article is a complete encyclopedic article in its own right and contains its own lead section that is quite similar to the summary in its parent article. It also contains a link back to the
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2) stating that even if one or a few citations representative of the sources in the subarticle are included, that the summary need not be limited to only what is treated in those few (i.e., editors revising a summary do not need to be unduly concerned about repeatedly returning to a hypothetical
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Longer articles are split into sections, each usually several good-sized paragraphs long. Subsectioning can increase this amount. Ideally, many of these sections will eventually provide summaries of separate articles on the subtopics covered in those sections. Each subtopic article is a complete
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Sometimes editors will add details to a summary section without adding those facts to the more detailed article. To keep articles synchronized, editors should first add any new material to the appropriate places in the detailed article, and, if appropriate, summarize the material in the summary
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I personally read that to mean that it is okay for a summary to include no citations (as long as it does not include a quotation or a likely-to-be-challenged assertion). However, I think that the overwhelming suggestion for many readers, though, will be the following, instead: that, with scant
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and I think something should be added to this page about that. But before proposing any specific phrase, what should be the position on this issue? How close should the section name be to the name of the main article?
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section, making it confusing and open to misinterpretation. I'd like to modify it to continue the parent/child article pattern of the rest of the guideline, as follows (bold for additions, strikethrough for removal):
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In my opinion, the choice of when to choose 'Main' vs. 'Further' links in the top-of-section link depends on the "relatedness" of the child article topic to the parent topic. More specifically, if there is a
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as an opportunity to test in combat their most advanced weapons and tactics. The Nationalists won the civil war in April 1939; Franco, now dictator, remained officially neutral during World WarII but
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Take the case when I want to summarise an article A in my article B. A is very well sourced but I do not have access to its sources; do I have to right to summarise it and/or use its inline cites?
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In contrast, the "instructive example text" is easy to read so far, and I am on board believing that the Spanish Civil War article will be nicely summarized for its purpose in the WWII article.
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The parent article should have general summary information, and child articles should expand in more detail on subtopics summarized in the parent article.
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section. If the detailed article changes considerably without updating the parent article, the summary section will need to be rewritten to do it justice.
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I agree. I don't think shortcuts that differ only by capitalization should ever have different targets. My suggestion would be to have both names target
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Below, I've collapsed the relevant "story" from the lead to the sync section, to show the language used up to that point, then how it changes in SYNC.
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Each article on Knowledge must be able to stand alone as a self-contained unit (exceptions noted herein). For example, every article must follow the
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summaries of each group of years would seem to need a link to the longer detailed information, which seems also to be a use for the main template. —
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1) adding an explicit statement that a summary in an article does not necessarily require any of the inline citations of the linked sub-article,
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single editor who holds copies of all the sources in the subarticle, to get approval of statements that are well-established in the subarticle),
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When a section is written in summary style, should it's name closely reflect the title of the article? This was the subject of a dispute (
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The first example gives, for the summary of Spanish Civil War (1936–1939), under Pre-war events, with "main"-type link to
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I can't figure out what discussion this is pointing too. However, I have put back the 40 kB, which is in line with the
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I really believe the summary in the WWII article should be like the lead of the Spanish Civil War article, which, by
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article. To keep articles synchronized, editors should first add any new material to the appropriate places in the
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article uses summary style, maybe doesn't work as it should, in that it doesn't convey that it is really okay to
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when a section is a summary? If the link to the main article can be incorporated into the text itself, as I did
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of Knowledge's policy and guideline documents is available, offering valuable insights and recommendations.
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3) that pointers to good examples of such summaries in mainspace Knowledge articles be provided, and
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procedure and is given additional attention, as it closely associated to the English Knowledge
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4) that someone (not me) be deputized to go improve use of summary style in the WWII article!
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In agreement with earlier discussion , I changed the obsolete 40 kB recommendation to 100 kB.
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When civil war broke out in Spain, Hitler and Mussolini lent military support to the
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article changes considerably without updating the parent article, the summary
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that relates to this question, and your feedback would be appreciated.
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guidance for the section name of a summary-style section on this page,
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For information on Knowledge's approach to the establishment of new
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be attributed to a reliable, published source in the form of an
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some great examples. However, the leading example, on how the
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I have an unusual situation and can't figure out where to ask.
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The terminology used throughout the guideline changes in the
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article, and, if appropriate, summarize the material in the
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comes to mind but I doubt it applies here, and I remember
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About citations, this wp:SUMMARY states the following:
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guideline and matches common use within GAN and FAC.
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to determine whether its use and function meets the
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in the absence of any objections after a few weeks.
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about its evacuation, for which the main article is
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